Monday, September 10, 2012

Untitled story in the making

I have had the urge to write lately so I sat down and started a story that me and my girlfriend have joked that I should write. This is the rough edition of what I would consider the first chapter. Lemme know what you think!


And so it begins...



Carl lay stretched out on the couch, legs in all directions.  His chest rose slightly with each breath and his tail slowly swished back and forth.  The light coming through the blinds illuminated every hair on his chest and face; his whiskers gleam like thin curved blades and twitched slightly whenever the wind comes through the window. 
Carl is house cat, an exceptionally lazy one at that.  His days are spent, like most cats, sleeping here and there and eating a couple of meals, but where Carl is different is in the fact that he sleeps not only during most of the day but most of the night as well.  He refuses to chase the magic red dot or to pounce on a slow fluffy mouse that squeaks in dismay only to return the living room day after day.  This is for the young.  Not for a respectable older gentleman who has had his days of sprinting through the house on a whim or chasing the reflections of the sun off a watch.  No not now, now there is much to ponder.  Important things like when will the food bowl be full again and what the optimum spots for napping are and most importantly when will the humans be back to rub his belly and scratch his head.  He guessed it had been a while and his belly agreed, its rumbling woke him from his nap.  
He pulled his head up and stretched his legs until he was double his normal length and began to shake from the tension.  He casually rolled over and looked around the house. He jumped off the couch and decided to make a quick loop of the house. Upon inspection he finds all the rooms empty and in an attempt to find someone looked out the window. The rumbling giant that they had used to take him to the evil man’s place was still there. That usually meant they were home but not today.  He checked the food bowl but it was still as empty as it was at darkness. He sat there wondering what was wrong. Something doesn’t feel right, it is too quiet. 
His whiskers twitched and he turned quickly and ran to the door. He rubbed against it but it doesn’t open. He tilted his head and looked at it. Why doesn’t it open? Did the people abandon him? He has lived in this house for long time and they had never been gone this long without putting out extra food.  Carl jumped back into the window sill and sat there. He looked at road where the other people’s giants usually chased each other and saw nothing but other houses and a few giants waiting for their masters.  One of these monsters was lying on the grass with its black breath coming from its nose, not is usual place.  He thought this was odd and watched for a minute.  Usually there were other people walking the street and the little human across the street throwing a big ball at the house trying to get it into a basket.  Carl’s heart began to beat faster, something wasn’t right.  
A scream made him bolt upright. He scanned the street and saw a female human running down the street.  He could see that she was wet, but it wasn’t the type of wetness that came from water. He could smell the iron and the sweat and another thing, fear, or panic or something like that.  He saw her trip and fall as her ankle gave out on the curb.  Behind her he could see some other humans following, in a slow gait that had no rhythm, like an injured mouse that was using its instincts to move rather than the inborn ability its thinking mind gave it. 
Carl watched as the group came to the place where the woman had fallen.  She began to scream and flail her arms hitting one of the people in the face as hard as she could. He didn’t seem to mind and continued to grab at her wind milling arms.  He got hold of one of them and while yelling sunk his teeth into her arm.  She screamed in agony as the rest of them came upon her, each one ripping at her and growling like beasts. Carl could smell the rancid flesh as they got closer and greater in number. This was wrong, people aren’t supposed to eat people, like cats aren’t supposed to eat other cats. He watched in a strange transfixed state while the stinking people devoured the woman.  The screaming stopped and the group of people, seemingly fulfilled, performed their uncoordinated sort of walk until they were out of sight. Carl was now to shaken to sit still. He paced the window sill and wondered if that same fate had befallen his humans.  If so what was he going to do, would he be stuck in this house unable to escape and die of starvation?  And even if he could escape where would he go?  He began to realize he was shaking and his stomach hurt.  He needed food and soon, he had to have a clear mind if he was to figure out what to do next. 

Introductions and such

So I have been gone a while and upon returning I realized I kinda skipped the Introduction step and posted nothing more than my name and a couple of poems I have written.  I figured I should take a moment to at least tell anyone that actually looks at this page a little about myself and the fire inside me that I would like to call love for the written and spoken word.

First and foremost my name is Anthony Justice, I'm 26 and I live in Minnesota (which also happens to be the same state as my favorite author, Neil Gaiman) I graduated from Minnesota State University, Mankato with a Bachelors Degree in Creative Writing and a minor in Philosophy which, to me, sounds really cool but is not very marketable.

So I started this here bloggy thing after years of bashing blogs and their respective bloggers for the simple fact that I felt stupid showing people my private work and feelings. But now, after years of showing others my work and getting criticism and commentary I am able to openly show my work and not get butt hurt by what others think.

I have mostly posted poetry but I cannot say what the extent of my posts will contain, could be any damn thing, like cute pictures of my new kitten, my 300 page novel (disregard this one because it doesn't exist), a video of me eating massive amounts of cookies or even my favorite spinach basil pesto sauce recipe, yum! But whatever it is feel free to comment and tell me what you think or feel, like or don't like, or just say hello.

Guten tag y'all
Anthony Justice